{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"20847981","dateCreated":"1267408046","smartDate":"Feb 28, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"ogibb1","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/ogibb1","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/engl317s10.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/20847981"},"dateDigested":1532760979,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"review my rough draft","description":"Hello Professor Miers,
\ncan you please read my rough draft and suggest changes to be made? I feel like it is lengthy at parts, but I also feel like all of the information presented is important, so I guess the biggest thing I need help with is getting rid of some of the "wordy" areas. And I could also use some pointers with paragraphing. Thank you.
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\nAlso, I don't have instructions on the editing part of the assignments... I edited my partners paper, but I don't know how to make the whole document either "green" "yellow" or "red" and I think there was something else we had to do as far as notifying you about the edit... I'm just confused about the process after I edit my partners paper.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"20851093","body":"I did some edits. It is not too long at all - good basic information.
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\nHere's the instructions for doing an overall evaluation of the page you edited and getting credit for your edit:
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\nWhen you finish editing, use one of the three levels from above for an overall rating of the draft. To record that term as you save the edit, click on the down arrow next to the Save button and type that color term in the Comment window. Then send a wiki email to the writer saying that you have finished your edit.
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\nGetting credit for your edit
\nEvery edit you make on a page is preserved in the editing history. To make it easy for me to see the edits you have done, you should:
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\n * click on the history tab for the page you have edited
\n * copy the URL for your most recent edit of that page
\n * paste that URL into a discussion board post on YOUR PERSONAL PAGE
\n * title that post "assignment name" edit
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\nThe instructions are on the "editing guidelines" page:
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