{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"23885415","dateCreated":"1273277326","smartDate":"May 7, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"amarti4","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/amarti4","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/engl317s10.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/23885415"},"dateDigested":1532760509,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"final","description":"I was wondering if you could take a look at my final paper and see if I was heading in the right direction.  Also if you have any suggestions on where to go from here. None of my figures came up but the links are there<br \/>\n<br \/>\nThank you<br \/>\n<br \/>\nAli","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"23886961","body":"I fixed some of the formatting and put the images on.  Get a working draft from here for all of the parts.  What you need to work on then is local consistency in how the story unfolds.  You start the executive summary for example with Napster, but the report starts with an intro that appears to take off on the current state of illegal downloading.  <br \/>\n<br \/>\nBut get down what you have to say about Limewire itself before you deal with that.","dateCreated":"1273282322","smartDate":"May 7, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"pdmiers","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/pdmiers","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1256422297\/pdmiers-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"23953605","body":"I am done with my working draft of my final paper.  I was wondering if you could take a look at it again.  I fixed some things and took your suggestions.  I am working on my reference page now and I still have to site the paper.  <br \/>\n<br \/>\nThank you <br \/>\n<br \/>\nAli Martino","dateCreated":"1273517409","smartDate":"May 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"amarti4","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/amarti4","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"24155759","body":"I just put some comments in red on the draft.  Sorry I didn't get back to you sooner.","dateCreated":"1273849451","smartDate":"May 14, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"pdmiers","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/pdmiers","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1256422297\/pdmiers-lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}