{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"24297503","dateCreated":"1274194508","smartDate":"May 18, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"ywan","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/ywan","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/engl317s10.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24297503"},"dateDigested":1532759940,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"could you also take a look of my recommendation?","description":"Dear Professor Miers,
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\ncould you also take a look of my recommendation?
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\nThank you!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"24298155","body":"The only thing I can say at this point is that it would better if you could add two or three bullet points that make specific recommendations regarding how to use Facebook \/ Twitter, etc based on the Starbucks case.","dateCreated":"1274195048","smartDate":"May 18, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"pdmiers","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/pdmiers","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1256422297\/pdmiers-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"24305505","body":"ok, thanks! I just revised my recommendation, could you take a look of it, because I don't know whether that's what you mean.
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\nThank you very much!","dateCreated":"1274201199","smartDate":"May 18, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"ywan","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/ywan","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"24306197","body":"That's what I meant.","dateCreated":"1274201979","smartDate":"May 18, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"pdmiers","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/pdmiers","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1256422297\/pdmiers-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"24306359","body":"so my recommendation is fine?","dateCreated":"1274202126","smartDate":"May 18, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"ywan","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/ywan","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"24307811","body":"Yes, in the sense that you added the points. You still need to be responsible yourself for editing the copy itself. I am telling everyone the same about their final reports at this point - so I can't \/ won't say more than that.","dateCreated":"1274203612","smartDate":"May 18, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"pdmiers","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/pdmiers","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1256422297\/pdmiers-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"24308053","body":"ok, I see. Thank you very much! Then I think I want to submit my final report. Can i just submit it on the wiki instead of the hardcopy?
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\nAnd you said we'll be able know our grade tomorrow afternoon?
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\nThank you! Have a nice summer
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\nYichi","dateCreated":"1274203822","smartDate":"May 18, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"ywan","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/ywan","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"24309203","body":"OK - the grades will be posted by tomorrow afternoon.","dateCreated":"1274205049","smartDate":"May 18, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"pdmiers","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/pdmiers","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1256422297\/pdmiers-lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"24280243","dateCreated":"1274153446","smartDate":"May 17, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"ywan","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/ywan","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/engl317s10.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24280243"},"dateDigested":1532759941,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"I just done with my final report, could you please take a look of it","description":"Dear Professor Miers,
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\nI just finished my final report, could you please take a look of it, and give me some comments. And could you see the "Referrences" part, whether the format I used is correct.
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\nThank you very much!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"24288559","body":"The references are fine. Tell me when you want to submit for grading.","dateCreated":"1274186541","smartDate":"May 18, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"pdmiers","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/pdmiers","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1256422297\/pdmiers-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"24290411","body":"Ok, Thank you very much! could you also take a look of my recommendation?
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\nThanks!","dateCreated":"1274188822","smartDate":"May 18, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"ywan","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/ywan","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"24214725","dateCreated":"1274047101","smartDate":"May 16, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"ywan","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/ywan","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/engl317s10.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24214725"},"dateDigested":1532759941,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Have questions of your comments","description":"Dear Professor Miers,
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\nI just revised my final report, could you please take a look at it, see whether ist ok. and I didn't understand one of your comments, you commented: "Then be sure to copy edit carefully." What did you mean by that?
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\nThank you very much!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"24217159","body":"It looks ok. What I meant by copy edit carefully is to proof read the final text for spelling, punctuation, and basic grammar.","dateCreated":"1274053147","smartDate":"May 16, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"pdmiers","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/pdmiers","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1256422297\/pdmiers-lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"24205381","dateCreated":"1274007996","smartDate":"May 16, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"ywan","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/ywan","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/engl317s10.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/24205381"},"dateDigested":1532759941,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Professor Miers, Could you please give me some comments on my final report","description":"Dear Professor Miers,
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\nI just did the draft of my final report,could you please give me some comments about my report, and can you tell me whether my report's format is correct? Thank you very much!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"24212279","body":"I put some comments at the top of the page.","dateCreated":"1274039426","smartDate":"May 16, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"pdmiers","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/pdmiers","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1256422297\/pdmiers-lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}