{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"23460315","dateCreated":"1272490453","smartDate":"Apr 28, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"ywan","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/ywan","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/engl317s10.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/23460315"},"dateDigested":1532759932,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"I just revised my strategy report, could you please take a look of it, and regrade it?","description":"Dear Professor Miers,
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\nI just revised my strategy report, could you please take a look of it, and regrade it?
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\nYichi","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"24177023","body":"I just changed your grade on Blackboard.","dateCreated":"1273865202","smartDate":"May 14, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"pdmiers","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/pdmiers","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1256422297\/pdmiers-lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"23013321","dateCreated":"1271716515","smartDate":"Apr 19, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"ywan","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/ywan","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/engl317s10.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/23013321"},"dateDigested":1532759932,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"I just revised my strategy report, could you please take a look of it, and regrade it?","description":"Dear Professor Miers,
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\nI just revised my strategy report, could you please take a look of it, and regrade it?
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\nYichi","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"22940051","dateCreated":"1271532327","smartDate":"Apr 17, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"ywan","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/ywan","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/engl317s10.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/22940051"},"dateDigested":1532759932,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"I can't read your comment of my strategy report.","description":"Dear Professor Miers,
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\nI can't read your comment of my strategy report. I've already highted all the places where you put the comment, could you please take a look of my stratrgy report. And explain those comments? Thank you very much","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"22940557","body":"After looking over this page, I am going to make a request. Could you bring me the marked up hard copy of your report on Monday so that I can compare exactly what I marked there with what you have color coded on this page?
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\nThe reason that I am asking this is that I can see specific problems in each of the sentences but in some cases those problems are a result of some relatively surface differences between Chinese and English grammar. In other cases, I think, they reflect more basic issues. Thus I would like to look again at the marked paper and talk with you briefly about each case. It is not going to benefit you very much if I just directly suggest specific corrections on this page. That only makes you all the more dependent on me telling you what counts as "correct" English grammar.","dateCreated":"1271534754","smartDate":"Apr 17, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"pdmiers","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/pdmiers","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1256422297\/pdmiers-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"22970183","body":"Ok, I'll brng it with me. Thank you very much!","dateCreated":"1271645448","smartDate":"Apr 18, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"ywan","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/ywan","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"20871881","dateCreated":"1267457558","smartDate":"Mar 1, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"ywan","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/ywan","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/engl317s10.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/20871881"},"dateDigested":1532759932,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"I don't understand one of your editting","description":" what does "WDY" mean. Here's your editing:
\n"WDY"
\nThe main advantage of Baidu is that it has the links to many free social networking websites, video, and audio website. Surprisingly, Yahoo is the search leader in both Hong Kong and Taiwan, but not in mainland of China (Digital East Asia; 2010). Overall, Baidu still controls the dominant social networking search engine in China.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"20872519","body":"WDY = wordiness. Cut out and cut down on redundant phrases in your sentences.
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\nsee:
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\nhttp:\/\/owl.english.purdue.edu\/owl\/resource\/572\/01\/<\/a>","dateCreated":"1267458075","smartDate":"Mar 1, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"pdmiers","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/pdmiers","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1256422297\/pdmiers-lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"20859655","dateCreated":"1267431256","smartDate":"Mar 1, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"ywan","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/ywan","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/engl317s10.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/20859655"},"dateDigested":1532759932,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"could read my strategy","description":"my parted had editted my strategy, could read it, and to see whether these change of editting is right? Thanks a lot","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"20864075","body":"I am not saying anything about the grade. But I did a quick look and suggested some changes.","dateCreated":"1267449122","smartDate":"Mar 1, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"pdmiers","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/pdmiers","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1256422297\/pdmiers-lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}