{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"23401347","dateCreated":"1272406711","smartDate":"Apr 27, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"ywan","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/ywan","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/engl317s10.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/23401347"},"dateDigested":1532759914,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"I revised my press release, still have some questions","description":"Dear Professor Miers,<br \/>\n<br \/>\n<br \/>\ni just revised it, could you please take a look of it? Because for the last place where you commented, I don't know what's wrong, but I still made some changes. Could you see whether it's ok.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nThank you very much!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"23344217","dateCreated":"1272325604","smartDate":"Apr 26, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"ywan","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/ywan","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/engl317s10.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/23344217"},"dateDigested":1532759914,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"I've done with my press release, could you please take a look of it","description":"Dear Professor Miers,<br \/>\n<br \/>\nI've done with my press release, could you please take a look of it?<br \/>\n<br \/>\nThank you.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"23352661","body":"I marked some things on the press release.","dateCreated":"1272335907","smartDate":"Apr 26, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"pdmiers","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/pdmiers","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1256422297\/pdmiers-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"23353007","body":"Dear Professor Miers,<br \/>\n<br \/>\nI didn't understand your comments? Why you make them in red? Do i need to chang something? And also what you mean with:&quot;Change the lead for this list - not everything in it is from focus groups.&quot;<br \/>\n<br \/>\nThank you.","dateCreated":"1272336501","smartDate":"Apr 26, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"ywan","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/ywan","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"23353233","body":"The sentences in red need editing - like for punctuation, capitalization.  The lead phrase for the list says that everything in the list came from focus group results.  But some of the things there are simply data from the web.  It's fine to use those facts but don't say they are from focus groups.","dateCreated":"1272336863","smartDate":"Apr 26, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"pdmiers","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/pdmiers","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1256422297\/pdmiers-lg.jpg"}},{"id":"23354745","body":"i just revised it, could you please take a look of it? Because for the last place where you commented, I don't know what's wrong, but I still made some changes. Could you see whether it's ok.<br \/>\n<br \/>\nThank you very much!","dateCreated":"1272340018","smartDate":"Apr 26, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"ywan","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/ywan","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"23406117","body":"All I did was change the quote.  I don't make any promises there aren't other problems to be fixed.  But that was my best quick take on it.","dateCreated":"1272412885","smartDate":"Apr 27, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"pdmiers","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/pdmiers","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1256422297\/pdmiers-lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}